2022年6月9日雅思大作文【商业-体育类】范文 – 高难必读

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今天我们来分享一下澳洲雅思考场本周六(2022.6.9)雅思大作文真题,本周范文如下:


Many companies promote their products through major sporting events. Is it a positive or negative development?


这道题难度非常大,对同学们的思维和词汇都提出了挑战。黄老师推荐同学们从不同的角度来构思。


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错误的固定思维模式


有很多同学在构思雅思大作文时会陷入❌固定思维模式:


观点1:运动会植入广告会增加品牌的销量。

然后想不出来对公司还有什么好处了


这时同学们不妨换个角度想想,广告对于这些运动项目是否有好处呢?那么,同学们就可以想到


观点2:广告可以为运动项目提供必要的资金。


很多时候,在构思时如果陷入了死胡同,不如换个角度,想想这件事对其他的对象有没有影响。这样就有新的观点了。


对于这道题来说,同学们可以使用的8分词汇为:(商业 & 体育类)


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满分词汇以及高分段落


integrated adj. 嵌入式(融为一体的)

boost v. 激增

professional sports league n. 职业体育联盟

instill v. 灌输

spending-mood n. 花钱的心情

sponsorship n. 赞助

revenue n. 回报

stadium n. 体育馆

win-win situation n. 双赢局面


那么,接下来我们一起来看范文吧!


2022.6.9真题


Many companies promote their products through major sporting events. Is it a positive or negative development?


好处段1:

Generally, integrated advertising is the most effective way for any brand to live within a piece of content, which in turn boosts the sales figure of the brand. Regardless of what professional sports league the content may be, integrated advertisement allows advertisers to instill their brand within an audience’s experience. Advertisers know that they have a trapped audience to pitch their name and brand and that most of the fans are not only in a spending-mood, but appreciate the sponsors that take care of their favorite teams. This can be translated into higher sales and product recognition, bringing large benefits for companies that use these events to advertise.  


好处段2:

Commercial sponsorship provides a legitimate source of revenue for a professional club or team. It helps to pay for the cost of the stadium, the teams and to keep the price of the tickets for each fan to a lower rate, creating a win-win situation for both stadium and advertiser. Without advertising, there would not be any games or at least anything that the average person could attend.





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