2022年2月8日澳洲雅思大作文【广告类】·范文-每年必考!


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各位学霸们好,今天黄老师给大家带来2022年2月8日澳洲考场雅思机试大作文真题和范文解析,考题如下:(国内考场2021.5.29原题


Some people think advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals not satisfied with what they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


广告类题型每年总要考那么几次,而且出现的形式相差不大,无非是对于消费/社会的影响,所以对于这类题型同学们可以固定积累一下黄老师的范文和高分词汇,如果在考场碰到类似题型一定能够用上



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题型分析


本题为Discuss Both类型的题目,对于这类题目同学们一定要注意双方观点是否矛盾:

1.双方观点矛盾:结论同意一边 + 中间段证明双方都对

2.双方观点不矛盾:结论同意双方 + 中间段证明双方都对

注意:无论支持哪一边,另一边只能写为什么对!!!(不能证明为什么错)


而且,对于Discuss Both类型的题目,结论千万不要写成这件事的好处大于坏处,(advantages outweigh disadvantages是另一类题型),即便同意某一边即为这一边好处更多,但是出于严谨也需要结论严格对照问题


那么,带着这个思路,我们来看看这次范文和高分词汇吧!(所有词句均为黄老师由英文杂志期刊中摘抄而出,保证为母语者级别英语,同学们可以放心背诵)



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范文及满分词汇


2022.2.8海外机试真题


Some people think advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals not satisfied with what they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


满分词汇:


sector n. 部门/行业

ripple v. 泛起涟漪

fuel v. 给…提供燃料

permeate v. 渗透

seep v. 渗透

mentality n. 心态

wasteful consumption n. 浪费的消费主义


观点1:

Commercial, which generates direct and indirect profit among all sectors as sales ripple throughout the economy, fuels economy by matching buyers and sellers efficiently. It provides valuable information about products and services in a cost-effective manner, informing customers about comparing features, benefits, and prices of the advertised goods and services. With more complete information, it will be more likely for consumers and businesses to purchase additional products and services. 


观点2:

Whether we are conscious of it or not, advertising has permeated our lives so much to the point that we are not even conscious of it. It is normal for advertising to put whatever’s being sold in a positive light, creating misrepresentations and unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling something consumers do not necessarily need. Its promotional arms race has seeped into all fields, powerfullyre-shaping consumer behavior from buying based on needs to purchasing based on wants, thereby creating a mentality of wasteful consumption







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