2022年3月3日雅思大作文真题范文:又是互联网题型!

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各位学霸们好,欢迎来到雅培英语每周大作文考题范文分享,今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下上周(2022.3.3)雅思大作文真题范文 & 解析,上周考题如下:


2022.3.3真题


Today more people put personal and private information online to do everyday activities such as banking, shopping and socializing. Is this a positive or negative development?


首先,对于positive or negative 类题型,同学们需要注意几点:



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1.写一边或者两边均可,绝对没有让步法得分更高一说。

2.千万不要在中间段出现建议,如‘我们不应该把信息放在网上‘,这类建议对应的agree or disagree题型,只要出现必定跑题!!


其次,对于互联网类型话题,同学们可能第一反应都是一些比较普通的词汇,比如:convenient / help us to work and live等,这类词已经被无数考生用烂了,同学们如果想要文章拿到一个高分,就必须出现一些出彩的词,比如:


digital privacy n. 电子隐私

data breach n. 数据泄露

identity theft n. 冒充顶替

scam n. 诈骗

virtual interaction  n. 虚拟沟通

fall prey to  v. 成为…的猎物(受害者)


这些词就是黄老师下文范文中使用的部分词汇,所有词都是黄老师在英文期刊杂志中摘抄而来的哦!同学们可以放心背诵,绝非中式英语。


同时,在今年1月份也考过类似话题,当时黄老师给的是优点段写法。所以,对于这篇文章,黄老师就只写缺点段(比起优点的烂俗词汇,反而更容易写出彩)如果同学们想看优点段写法的话,黄老师在下面也附上1月份范文,同学们可以同时查阅背诵。


那么,接下来让我们一起来看范文吧(转载需注明出处!!!)



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2022年3月3日真题范文

2022.3.3真题


Today more people put personal and private information online to do everyday activities such as banking, shopping and socializing. Is this a positive or negative development?


满分词汇:


digital privacy n. 电子隐私

data breach n. 数据泄露

identity theft n. 冒充顶替

scam n. 诈骗

virtual interaction  n. 虚拟沟通

fall prey to  v. 成为…的猎物(受害者)


坏处段1:


Surveillance has become the business model of the internet, with everything -from location, history, to browsing habits - under constant monitor by numerous companies, ranging from social networks like Facebook to cellphone providers. Such information is collected, compiled, analyzed, and used - regardless of the willingness of Internet users - to promote personalized advertising in order to gain profit for these companies at the expanse of users’ digital privacy.


坏处段2:


In the past decade, data breaches and password leaks have constantly struck major companies and countless others. If one has multiple online accounts, hackers have likely leaked data from at least one of them, and this data can be used for identity theft, including online scam or internet banking fraud, causing billions of damage to the general public. 


坏处段3:


It is true that a number of introverts and socially reclusive users place too much emphasis on virtual interaction, and ignore the real world outside. Also, school children, young girls, and women, with all of their personal information easily accessible online, can fall prey to online attacks such as cyber bullying, or online harassment, which can create tension and distress.  


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2022年1月15日真题范文


2022.1.15真题


版本1:

New technologies have changed the way people spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

版本2:

Many people use social media to keep in touch with each other every day. Do think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?


满分词汇:

introvert  n. 内向(的人)

socially reclusive users  n. 被社会排挤的用户

virtual interaction  n. 虚拟沟通

fall prey to  v. 成为…的猎物(受害者)

alienation  n. 疏远

withdrawal from society  n. 脱离社会

acquaintances  n. 熟人(朋友未满)

professionals  n. 职业人士

collaborate  v. 合作


优点段1:

However, although intense use of social media increases the risk of isolation, alienation, and withdrawal from society, it can actually increase sociability, civic engagement, and the intensity of family and friend relationships, in all cultures if used properly. We would still be sitting by a candle and writing a letter to get in touch with a friend, as opposite to sitting in front of the computer and logging into social medias to contact a friend or family member on the other side of the world if it was not for certain inventions that were so incredible that they had enough impact to change the whole world forever.


优点段2:

In addition, social networks offer the opportunity for people to re-connect with their old friends and acquaintances, make new friends, share content and pictures, and many other activities. For instance, professionals use social media sties like LinkedIn to enhance their career and business prospects while students can collaborate with their peers to improve their academic proficiency and communication skills.



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